Correction of the homework on what I have learned in making an advertisement for the food fair

In this assignment, I have learnt how to write an English script. I have never written an English script, it is the first time and I think it is quite difficult to write a good and clear script. And I have learnt more cooking methods too. I like the process of doing and acting the video, I enjoy it very much. I think I have to improve my grammar more so that there won't be any mistake next time.